While it was an okay flash, i do relate!!!!!!!
I kinda feel asleep during some of the movie, but the part i wa s awhile for was loaded with transitions!
It almost took me out of the movie! what was up with that!?
Ha Ha, a few comments i think you should listen to
Your idea is kool i hope you run with it...
But you need to refine the graphics and make it longer, or go the other way and make A TON of short films.
If you improve the graphics then you could rival Bitey of BrackenWood. (By improve i mean the character and detail)
Lol Look up a dude named Cool_Penguin_0 he makes
the same kinda movies you do...
Do it. DO IT.
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