While it was an okay flash, i do relate!!!!!!!

I kinda feel asleep during some of the movie, but the part i wa s awhile for was loaded with transitions!

It almost took me out of the movie! what was up with that!?

Ha Ha, a few comments i think you should listen to

Your idea is kool i hope you run with it...

But you need to refine the graphics and make it longer, or go the other way and make A TON of short films.

If you improve the graphics then you could rival Bitey of BrackenWood. (By improve i mean the character and detail)

Lol Look up a dude named Cool_Penguin_0 he makes

the same kinda movies you do...

DO IT!